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Vezz... if only everyone else had the insight to the character that everyone in the same playing group as him does.
A review of Vezz/Ivalious Leafstrider by Vezz
Introduction
"Vezz" Ivalious Leafstrider was starting to become a very complex character, I know because I was there as he was being developed... The problem is that the history written here doesn't do him justice.
Cons
"Vezz" works mechanically hands down but that background needs to be more detailed. I know there is a lot more to him that makes him a very interesting character.
That is really your only problem. If I had known you were going to put him up I would have helped you write his history. Let me know next time!
Pros
Works with game mechanics.
Conclusion
"Vezz" could be a great addition to the Forge if he had his whole history detailed out.
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| 8 |
Playability: The game mechanics are there but motives and personality aren't
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| 7 |
Originality: I would rate Vezz higher on originality if you had written his whole background, but I can't use "out of game knowledge" to grade this.
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| 10 |
Game Mechanics: Works with the mechanics.
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| 5 |
Style: No style, background detail would change this rating.
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| 7 |
Overall: Guffy, write out the whole background.
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